Someday...

When he talks, he shouts. When she talks, she cries. The one thing that they share is SILENCE amidst all the things they are meant to share. She adores all the pain that comes from him, she is happy there is something he has to give to her and ONLY to her. He inflicts his bitterness as much as he can, on her. Relationships change. Some of them have nothing to save and nothing to fix. You just live with them. May be this is just one of those, she thinks. Someday the pain will disappear, Someday she will get the courage to fight back, Someday she will move on, Someday she will LIVE. May be for one day but she will breathe again, she tells herself.

44 comments:

AB January 22, 2010 at 6:34 PM  

and when will that someday come when she will do something about her so called LIFE?

Nidz January 22, 2010 at 6:49 PM  

she adores him n it wont go waste.. love cant go waste..

Rohit Dassani January 22, 2010 at 7:14 PM  

Kya hoo gaya hai yaar? Tu ase bilkul bhi achi nahi lagte.... come on cheer up.... :)

Mads January 22, 2010 at 11:33 PM  

I can totally connect to this one after reading the book 'A Thousand Splendid Suns'

an ironically true post... I hope there is no one like her in this world.
tc :)

Siddhartha Agrawal January 23, 2010 at 12:48 AM  

wonderfully written but i hope this is fiction!

Sneha Shrivastava January 23, 2010 at 8:18 AM  

That someday is today. she has to liberate herself from everything that sucks and this relationship is exactly that. I pray she has the courage to do that.

Ramit Grover January 23, 2010 at 11:16 AM  

For today, I really doubt there is any sense in living like this. But this is the harsh truth about out Indian society.

And ironically, it's us men who create such miseries and then later blame feminism for ruining families.

Gaurav Kant Goel January 23, 2010 at 3:02 PM  

May that 'someday' be sooner ...

Rià January 23, 2010 at 3:32 PM  

that was painful....i hate it when ppl dont acknowledge the love u give them!!

Thousif Raza January 23, 2010 at 5:12 PM  

i absolutely agree with ria... oh the pain and the hurt.... can explain them in words... time is a healer, let it heal... let it heal :)


take care and keep writing..........

Akanksha January 23, 2010 at 7:19 PM  

Sad:( She is hoping against hope. Fairytales don't come true so I guess, today should be 'someday' that she is waiting for, and should take control of her life.

Hope all is well wid u...This post is sooooooooooooooooooo unlike Harshita:(

Take care sweets
Akanksha

Lyrically speaking January 24, 2010 at 3:19 AM  

wow...I'm glad to have stumbled upon your page. Great writing

Richa January 24, 2010 at 1:47 PM  

When will the blow of air come to her to make her breathe? Only she ahs to decide that..

♪♪Happy Go Lucky♪♪ January 25, 2010 at 8:09 PM  

LOL If anyone asked me this on my blog after reading my post, I'd get all mad and freak out, so feel free to do so with me too..
So here goes.. "You okay?"
:P :P

Aditya Nandode January 26, 2010 at 1:02 PM  

Sad, cause its sad state and today is not the day of change, agree cause its true, and smile, for she has hope.

Nice writing!

Rajlakshmi January 27, 2010 at 12:02 AM  

that is so sad... hope she gains enough courage soon...
well written...

Unknown January 27, 2010 at 1:47 PM  

I know how this feels....
and I know of a girl who not only fought back like u said here...but learned to live life so well that the pain doesn't hurt her anymore coz she's left it way behind her! :)

could relate to this post


Pj

Nidz January 27, 2010 at 2:21 PM  

every one knows hw it feels like this post and "i can relate to this one"
its surprising..
nothing unique left to feel in this world i guess


any ways m here again in this post to scream at u to Update ur blog
waiting :-w

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:04 AM  

@Abhinav
Who knows when?

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:04 AM  

@Niddzzi
This way of thinking is disastrous at times.

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:04 AM  

@Rohit
I am happy...it's just a post :)

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:05 AM  

@Arpit
thanks...u can smile now

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:05 AM  

@Mads
Yeah let's hope so

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:05 AM  

@Apparantely Intellectual
Hmm it is.

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:05 AM  

@Sneha
Let us pray..Right.

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:05 AM  

@Ramit
U r so honest abt it ... we need more men like u

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:06 AM  

@Thousif
In such cases, time does not.

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:06 AM  

@akanksha
Well, some realities are too harsh...so we cannot keep them closed in a corner

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:06 AM  

@Lyrically speaking
Thanks

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:07 AM  

@Rajalakshmi
Me hope for the same.

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:07 AM  

@Pooja
Hmm....gud for her...she fought back.

Me January 29, 2010 at 12:07 AM  

@Niddzzi (again)
I am back.

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