Height of Love
Pata hain kya? I have done something crazy today....
I am not well, down with fever :( I am reading all your blogs par not feeling like writing anything on my own. But somehow I stumbled over a blog post tht talked abt a short-story writing competition. Ab main koi itni gyaani toh hun nahi... still I thought why not give it a shot...after all bed par rest kar kar key bhi main bore ho gayi... and then people shud also suffer a bit after reading what I write naa...
Unhey bhi pata chaley boriyat ka dard kya hota hain... :P
So I gave myself a time-span of 15 mins and wrote watever came to mind. The rule was that it cannot exceed 250 words and should be centred around this picture.
Mainey titled diya : HEIGHT OF LOVE
Ab jhelo... I mean pado... aur buraayee wuraayee karni ho toh soch lena... ki main pehley hi beemar hun... dukhi ko aur dukh dogey... toh kahaan bharogey...hahahahaha... Kya mast torture maara mainey...anyways... pado ab. (Now bear with it and before u criticise me... remember that I am not well and giving more pain to someone whoz already suffering is nasty...hehe... am so gud at threatning people at time...read on now)
Lemme tell u before u start reading it...the characters are same old...Ghisey Pitey... Sia and Arjun... (soch rahi hun unki ek full-fldged story likh hi dun...lol)
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HEIGHT OF LOVE
Acrophobia... Acrophobia
Sia recalled it as soon as she looked at the escalator at busy North Point Station.
She was not going to be afraid...no...she was not going to be... she kept telling herself, "Its just 4 floors".
She stood there blank, staring at the escalator. "Hello, I wonder if there is something more interesting than me for a pretty woman to look at",a voice broke her silence of doubt.
"Oh! well...umm...", she hesitated more.
He could see the beads of sweat on her forehead and sense her nervousness... "Scared of heights?", he asked. She nodded in agreement.
Before she could realize, he put his hand around her waist and with a soft push, both of them were on the elevator.
She looked at him with shock. He whispered, “Don't worry. I am there. You have beautiful eyes, did anyone tell you that?”
She blushed and replied with a smile, "And you have some chivalry, pushing a woman along with you on the escalator".
"Here we come." He let go of her as soon as they reached the floor. "In that case, if you still want to remember me, I am Arjun", he smiled and disappeared in the crowd.
"Some love stories begin and end on an escalator. It’s been 5 years", Sia thought loudly.
"Ours did not” she turned around to see Arjun smiling at her.
”Yeah! Ours did not”, she smiled and while they kissed she looked at the ring in her hand and closed her eyes.
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Okay! ab mujhey blame mat karna...jisney contest shuru kiya.. usko bolo... waisey bhi yeh select toh honey waali nahi... par ab likhi hain toh kisi ko toh padni padegi naa...time to take rest now... bye hain!! :) hehehe
34 comments:
Hmmm... now thats interesting...
and its good to see Sia & Arjun again :)
have a lovely day :)
Cheers...
Hey harshita...i hav such a fixation for ur stories....u knw dat right??
hey nice one!loved it!
get well soon:)
Hey get well soon....and I liked the story...All the best...I think they gonna select it..
:)
Get Well Soon My dear....!!!
abt the story....its a good one...loved it...!!!
get well soon...good story...waise aisi ladkiyan real life me bhi milti hai kya?? agar hai to batana ;)
get well asap !! and keep on writing ur awesome stories :D Lovely to read them...
i am gonna be seen near every excalator in town from now on
oooh me scared of escalators..but no arjun ever did that for me :(( dammit :P
nice n cute one there and get well soon.. :-)
abb kahaani mein twist ka zamaana he(shayad),nding accha hee hota he,
par readers ko itna dara dete hain ki woh bechara(i) last line dekh ke "thank god!" kehta/ee he.(hum toh yehi karte hain..lol).aap ki kahaani bhi acchi thi,bich wala hissa kabhi aur vistaar mein batayiyaga.shubh ratri.
i am down wid the fever too ..same pinch :D
btw story is mast ..and yeah the title is so suitable \:D/
acrophobia ..i have a slight acrophobia too :P
and wah ..shaadi kab ho rahi hai un dono ki ??
next post mein ??
wow sia and arjun are back!!! and what a story..brilliant!!
yea.. i read s part of sia and Anjun love story.. awww it was nice..
Nice. Will check out your other stories when I get time. Get well soon. I got flu too. Gah..
Cheers! ^_^
awww. such a cute luv story :P m sure you are gona add some competition :P
cute story that is....way to go...u can actually think of writing a story for a bollywood movie.. :)
@Arv
Thanks for being so nice to them.
@ Born Vagabond
Haan... koi toh hain jo meri likhi kahaani padta hain..haha
@ Meera
Thanks...
@ Toonfactory
I missed the deadline... ;) hamesha ki tarah...hehe...
@ Yamini
Thanks... for ur wishes
@abhishek
Thanks oye! haan agar aisey ladkey hongey... toh aisi ladkiyan bhi mil jaayengi...
@Rahul
Thanks for ur wishes...
@ Chris
haha... cross ur fingers...
@ Mads
Kya pata... koi Arjun mil hi jaaye next time...
@ Anwesa
zarur... for someone like me who talks n talks...itney kamm words mein sab kehna..mushkil tha...hehe
@peter
same pinch oye!!
thanks yaar...me too have acrophobia...
no shaadi.. :P bas yehi kahaani khatam...
@Raka
Yeah they r back.. ;) thnks
@ Niddzzi
Tu toh story padney ki chor hain... tuney pad li toh matlab kuch toh aisa hain iss mein...hehehe...
@ Firebolt
Thanks... u too get well soon...
@ Sawan
Thanks a lot... I missed the deadline... but koi nahi... u guys read it.. its enuff for me...
@ soumya
haha... dont u pity bollywood...hehe...thanks yaar.
hahaha...
how can u think of so many love stories n encounters... mills boon seems like to be on your pillow side all the time :)
anyways she looked at the "escalator".. he pushed her in "elevator" but they ended in an "escalator"
just wonderin :o (rollin eyes)
@Aevi
dekha...meds make me go dizzy and I write stuff like this... haha :)
I am a big MB fan :D
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